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Halloween: The Pests
based on a sketch I found in my Spanish notebook from last year.
based on a sketch I found in my Spanish notebook from last year.
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3258x2520px 10.35 MB
© 2008 - 2024 Skeleton-Boy
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Constructive criticism from "Bumble-Boo":
"I actually think this piece is really cute! I like the drawing, but I think something that could really help is using a finer pen. I am going to assume you are using a fine tip pen of some sort, if you can find a finer one, that might be good! Otherwise, you might consider getting a pen and ink set, where you can buy different size nibs. It's really my preferred way of going about things. I find you get more control as well! It takes a little getting used to, but I think you could really get better results with them.
The only other thing I would suggest is tuning up the colour. Make a bit stronger, especially in the sky, or the ground. They are both the same value right now and it might be nice to see one being darker than the other. You could work on your colour scheme entirely and make the sky, ground and creatures in the distance cooler colours, and creatures in the foreground warmer colours. This is an easy way to create depth, while still keeping your piece simple. "
"I actually think this piece is really cute! I like the drawing, but I think something that could really help is using a finer pen. I am going to assume you are using a fine tip pen of some sort, if you can find a finer one, that might be good! Otherwise, you might consider getting a pen and ink set, where you can buy different size nibs. It's really my preferred way of going about things. I find you get more control as well! It takes a little getting used to, but I think you could really get better results with them.
The only other thing I would suggest is tuning up the colour. Make a bit stronger, especially in the sky, or the ground. They are both the same value right now and it might be nice to see one being darker than the other. You could work on your colour scheme entirely and make the sky, ground and creatures in the distance cooler colours, and creatures in the foreground warmer colours. This is an easy way to create depth, while still keeping your piece simple. "